DISNEY - FOX - PARAMOUNT - MIRAMAX - WARNER BROS. all use in-depth development notes.

STUDIO-LEVEL SCRIPT ANALYSIS and DEVELOPMENT NOTES by PRODUCED WRITER.

Paul Young is the original writer of the Warner Bros. feature BORN TO BE WILD (a Billboard Top Ten Video Hit), his spec script GREATAMERICA was bought by Robert Redford/Wildwood, and his screenplay adaptation of the critically-acclaimed novel MENDEL'S DWARF is to be produced by Barwood Films, with Barbara Streisand as Executive Producer. He also is a script consultant whose clients include Academy Award nominees for Best Picture, Best Director, Best Original Screenplay and Best Adapted Screenplay, and the Winner of the Grand Jury Prize at the Cannes Film Festival.

Mr. Young provides in-depth analysis that identifies the strengths and weaknesses of a script, provides detailed solutions for all creative problems, and supplies a complete range of development proposals that functions as A GUIDE THROUGH THE REVISION PROCESS. This guarantees the best possible script in the minimum number of drafts, and ensures that screenplays will not go into the marketplace with hidden or unresolved creative limitations - a form of script insurance.

His industry clients and projects include Academy Award Nominee, writer/director Peter Jackson - THE LORD OF THE RINGS: THE FELLOWSHIP OF THE RING and THE TWO TOWERS, and HEAVENLY CREATURES; BREAKING THE WAVES, winner of the Grand Jury Prize at the Cannes Film Festival; SHILOH (Warner Bros.), which spawned SHILOH 2, and the Stan Lee/Fox project TOMORROW.

The service comes in several forms, from a two-page set of Story Notes, to a 15-20-page Screenplay Analysis and follow-up one-hour telephone story conference, with fees ranging from $200.00 to $500.00. His website contains a 25-PAGE SAMPLE SCREENPLAY ANALYSIS, as well as screenwriting endorsements by major studio executives and producers, including the following:

"The writing is first rate."
Laurence Mark - Producer of: As Good As It Gets - Working Girl - Jerry Maguire - Finding Forrester.

" Well-written, with good characters."
Richard D. Zanuck - Producer of: The Sting - Jaws - Cocoon - Deep Impact - Planet of the Apes.

"I have a lot of respect for Paul's writing, and would be happy to read more of his work.."
Wendy Finerman - Producer of: Forrest Gump - The Fan - Stepmom.

"We really enjoyed Paul's writing."
Roger Birnbaum - Producer of: Rush Hour - The Sixth Sense - Shanghai Noon - Unbreakable.

"An interesting story with fascinating central characters."
Robert Rehme - Producer of : Clear and Present Danger - Patriot Games - The Sum of All Fears.

"A compelling read."
Stacey Snider - Chairman - Universal Pictures.

"Mr Young is a very fine writer."
Ned Tanen - Producer of : Sixteen Candles - The Breakfast Club - St. Elmo's Fire.
Former President of Production - Universal Pictures, Paramount Pictures.

"The characters are wonderful."
Nana Greenwald - Kopelson Entertainment. Producers of: Platoon - Seven - The Fugitive.

"A richly illustrated piece. The character is finely crafted and serves the screenplay well."
Deborah Newmyer - Amblin Entertainment. Producers of: E.T. The Extra-Terrestrial - Back to the Future - Jurassic Park - Men in Black - Twister - Saving Private Ryan. Minority Report - Catch Me If You Can.

"Paul is a very gifted writer with a lot of soul."
Susan Zachary - Rosemont Productions. Producers of: The Secret Garden - A Knight in Camelot.

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