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Chris Soth, founder of MillionDollarScreenwriting.com
I was consulting w/a student on an idea of hers the other day, not an awful
lot so far, just a "one-line" but she did ask me at one point:
"We've got our main character, but what about some other characters?
Who else is IN this movie?"
I was a little stunned at first. I don't really work that way, and for
the most part, you probably don't either - I guess I won't be the first
to make the disclaimer that most of this stuff we teach in screenwriting
classes and books and even on our websites is often best employed till after
the first draft. And I certainly won't be the last to say, "Write from
you heart - REWRITE from your head." All this along the way of saying
usually
it's slightly more organic and part of the writing process in the rough
draft that we find and create the characters we need. Then we use the guidelines
and "hard screenwriting knowledge" to refine and hone them.
But I'm always up for a challenge - and I was consulting
and she asked. And the same rules and guidelines apply at all stages of
the game, don't they? If writing is rewriting, and it IS, can't rewriting
also be writing? By which I mean can't we bring some advanced-stage thinking
to bear early in the game, before there's even a word on paper? Maybe
The screenplay we'd been working on was a love story and we had thus far
we had been focused on "boy" and "girl", as in the famous
homily "boy meets girl, boy loses girl, boy gets girl
"
And I realized I WAS able to figure out some characters that needed to
be in this story, just by the theme and the character arc that the main
character was to go through
because
and excuse me if I'm stating
the obvious, but I've never heard or seen anyone say this in quite this
way:
A movie story is structured to deliver a THEME
And that theme is contained in the Main Character's "Arc" - the
path of change the character goes through in the story.
And so, roughly stated, the theme is every story is "Change is good."
Or: the type of change depicted herein is good" OR - "if you're
the type of person this main character is, you should change as s/he does."
Lastly, and here's where you can spin characters out of thin air with little
more than a hero, his or her arc, your theme and your premise
all your characters, strictly speaking, are REFLECTIONS OF YOUR HERO,
MAIN CHARACTER OR PROTAGONIST
we need them to throw your hero into
high relief by comparison - comparison is one of the two vital tools for
showing character. For example:
YOUR ANTAGONIST OR VILLAIN: Will be, for the most part, the antithesis
of your main character, right? They will embody antithetical values. But
they will have one vital thing in common with the hero - they will want
the same thing, the same desire will drive them throughout the story.
And all your characters will be laid out somewhere, some way, on this same
continuum of values
so
just making up these nicknames as I go
along:
THE "YOU OUGHTA BE THIS GUY" GUY: This character has undergone
the character arc that your main character needs to undergo, or just naturally
got it goin' on in this one dimension of character. They serve as an illustration
to your hero as to what he SHOULD become. Often the hero's best friend,
counseling him to change, telling him what his problem is
sometimes
sort of a moral guiding voice, other times more of what the French called
"Le Raissionneur" - the character that expresses the author's
viewpoint.
THE "WATCH OUT FOR THIS" GUY: This guy is the antithesis of the
above guy (read "or gal" on all of these). He's what will happen
to your hero IF he does not change and undergo this character arc, being
like this guy, or worse, will be his fate. Sometimes in a a thriller/action
sort of story this is the antagonist, but often, and we see her or him DESTROYED
by the same desire our hero has
and his inability to change
but
sometimes, it's a minor character that gives us and the hero a glimpse of
what the end of the road holds for them if they don't turn away
Essentially, a character each to represent either end of the main character's
"character arc". Now, should they be living, breathing people
as well? Of course. Should they come organically from the world our hero
lives in? Absolutely. But, asked the question before I can live in that
world or even have the hero fully drawn
this could be a jump start.
And now, some examples:
Call me old-fashioned, but I love Casablanca. It's great for examples and
I've learned a lot, A LOT from it, because, well
it's a perfect movie. It's not my favorite movie of all time, but
it IS a perfect movie or as near as has ever been made, and there may not
have been one since. In fact, whenever I'm stuck for a scene, or wonder
what a specific Mini-Movie should be in a story, it's not long before I'm
asking myself:
"What do they do in Casablanca?"
In Casablanca, we've got Rick Blaine (as portrayed by Humphrey Bogart),
he's an isolationist, won't stick his neck out for nobody, and serves only
his self interest, especially when it comes to the woman he loves, Ilsa
HE OUGHTA BE: Victor Lazlo (as portrayed by Paul Henreid), a selfless freedom
fighter, who sticks his neck out for everyone, everywhere - and who will
gladly sacrifice anything, everything for the woman he loves, Ilsa Lund.
And in fact, it looks like this is who Rick will become as the credits
roll, as his character arc has completed - "Where I go, you can't follow,
etc
" he's off to become a freedom fighter, to take on the Nazis
and fight for the little guy, as he used to before Ilsa broke his heart
in the backstory.
But
if Rick keeps up his selfish ways, he'll never be that guy. In
fact, he'll become:
THE CAUTIONARY TALE: Captain "Louie" Renault (as portrayed by
Claude Rains). Here's a man who "blows with the wind" and serves
only his own self-interest
and when it comes to love - Louie's happy
to "whore out" any or every woman he comes across
and his
doing so w/a young Bulgarian refugee serves as an object lesson for Rick
at one point
This is what Rick has to avoid - and in the end, Louie ends up changing
too, and heading off into the future WITH Rick.
So, Victor Lazlo, Captain Renault
both mirrors to Rick Blaine. One
is what Rick SHOULD be
the other what he COULD become
All of them arranged along the theme: "It's good to sacrifice for
others.", and each at a different point on the hero's character arc.
Of course, you may do a lot of this on instinct in your rough draft. You
may poke around it and not quite be sure what you're doing and why you're
doing it. But ultimately, character, arc and theme will work together to
provide a potent combination.
I hope this helps in your writing and you'll check out other tips like
this from MillionDollarScreenwriting.com.
Thanks "A Million",
Chris Soth
MillionDollarScreenwriting.com
CHRIS SOTH developed the “Mini-Movie Method” after years of success
as a Hollywood screenwriter. Chris has multiple projects in development
at major Hollywood studios. This master story teller is also an expert in
pitching and selling - necessary tools for a screenwriter in Hollywood.
Chris holds an MFA in screenwriting and a BA in Dramatic Literature. He
is the only seminar instructor whose work has been produced by a major Hollywood
studio.
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